Singing spaces
We sleep like two open brackets lying on the same side. My hair is forever in your face. I push it away exasperatedly. You are gentler with it. And when it finally comes in the way of a kiss, in reckless abandon I ask you, shall I shave it all away?
Your eyes are the most unreadable things I have ever turned to. I'll learn their language one of these days and know all your secrets.
There is a conversation. Airborne alphabets caught by half listening ears.
Your hands cup my breasts. They feel small. You assure me yet again they're perfect. The many ways we make lie a truth.
Give me a love bite, I ask you.
You try. And again. You tell me you really don't know how and you'll only end up biting me hurt.
It turns me on and I curl a little tighter. I haven't reached that stage when I can easily let you know what happens with me. You haven't reached the stage where you assume you know what I want.
There's you, me and some silence in between…tightly packed, not much room between us.
Your eyes are the most unreadable things I have ever turned to. I'll learn their language one of these days and know all your secrets.
There is a conversation. Airborne alphabets caught by half listening ears.
Your hands cup my breasts. They feel small. You assure me yet again they're perfect. The many ways we make lie a truth.
Give me a love bite, I ask you.
You try. And again. You tell me you really don't know how and you'll only end up biting me hurt.
It turns me on and I curl a little tighter. I haven't reached that stage when I can easily let you know what happens with me. You haven't reached the stage where you assume you know what I want.
There's you, me and some silence in between…tightly packed, not much room between us.
20 Comments:
Woo!!! the first one to comment I was reading through after a long long time....friend!!!!!!
and i refreshed the page saw a new one there!!!! so the previlege to post the first one without even reading ....it :-)
actually , does it happen like this all the time :-)
if yes!!! hats off!!!i appreciate ur time...
or else kudos to the imaginative spirit in you!!!!
P'ma , you rock!
and so I am the 2nd and the 3rd one...:-) I wish I could start off my writing all over again...but time permits me to do just read and live on...for the time being...good one this time too!
I loved the first line :)
I like, as per my previous comment, this is turning into one of those sites ;-)
Lazith: Long time! :) And thank you for all the nice things you've said.
Xeres: :)
Xoff: All those are 'trails' or 'excerpts'. I dont think I can write such stuff very nice!
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There sure is magic doing the rounds and there sure is a lot of love in the air.. What can I say? Couldn't have read something more poetic and beautiful first thing in the morning.
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"Your eyes are the most unreadable things I have ever turned to. I'll learn their language one of these days and know all your secrets"....WOW! Gr8 work of words...meeting a real poet online.Will visit again
Unknowingly I giggled and at the end of it had a smirkish smile on my face - which means I loved it ! :D
so what happens when one of the two become a closed bracket []/][ ....??
Rohit: Thank you! :)
Arvind: Magic eh? :)
Sri: Welcome here.
Mahesh: :)
Varun: Dont tell me I have to take biology class on my blog now! :)
I never thought this way. Amazing.
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Commenting cos I could relate :)
She asks me for a love bite, when i fail.. she teaches me. We haven't yet reached where we ought to be...
beautiful soulful writing ..
A little late, I know. I had to comment though; outstanding play with words. Loved the entry.
"Your eyes are the most unreadable things I have ever turned to. I'll learn their language one of these days and know all your secrets"
why do you have to be searching questioning all the while ?
"The many ways we make lie a truth"
WOW.. and a WOW and a WOW!!
I just LOVED it to the core!
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