Monday, June 30, 2008

Liff

I heard
his heart
beat my name
but
with
a
wrong spelling.


25 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wrong spelling means he is the wrong person for you...

3:52 AM  
Blogger sanu said...

few lines of ink...
many meanings of life!


Cheers!

4:47 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Anon: Or I am the wrong person for him?

Sanu: No ink too, these days.

5:11 AM  
Anonymous prv said...

And you don't hear hearts that beats your name with right spelling... :)

5:57 AM  
Blogger Preetha Nair said...

nice ! :)

9:30 AM  
Anonymous Anon said...

Onnum manasilaayilla :(

12:13 PM  
Anonymous Mahesh said...

I guess that's why they say 'love is blind'. You might have probably listening to the wrong heart

or you were simply listening though u knew you would hear the wrong words! :P

Or may be you were too paranoid that you simply heard the wrong words! ;)[though it might have just been you]

8:02 PM  
Blogger usha said...

the illusion of love can play really wierd tricks on an unsuspecting mind..

-'wrong spelling'
well said!

11:04 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Prv: They do?

Preetha: :) Ty!

Anon: :)

Mahesh: Too 'maybe'!

Usha: Illusion, delusion... so many things of the same genre.

11:43 PM  
Blogger Meena Venkataraman said...

:) Brevity is part of your arsenal too.. ?.. Fab!!

5:38 AM  
Anonymous Mahesh said...

Uff! u were not supposed to concentrate on the 'maybe' :(

9:52 PM  
Blogger arvindiyer said...

Poetic Justice:)

12:13 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sometimes, wrong spellin make the name sound sexier!!

:-) SS

3:51 AM  
Blogger Impulsively Me said...

What's in a name? :P

Lovely verses, though :)

Cheers,
Me

11:13 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

everytime u write a post u also seems to get an apt picture for it....

8:59 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Meena: Brevity is the soul of lingerie- read somewhere. :)

Mahesh: Ah... what to do! Women!!!

Arvind: Yup! :)

SS: And a slap 'stingier'.

Impulsively me: Yeah! :)

Anon: That my dear, takes an awfully long time being found.

10:09 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Not sure if something amicably sexy deserves a slap?!
:-) SS

2:36 AM  
Blogger Meena Venkataraman said...

Hahaha :):)

8:24 AM  
Blogger Animesh Raj said...

love makes one imagine things...love makes one so vulnerable...small and crisp. well written.

6:15 AM  
Blogger cyclopseven said...

Deeper that eternity. Unplumbed by any. Short, but pack.

8:02 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Meena: :)

Animesh: Ty.

Cyclops: :)

12:02 AM  
Blogger Sri said...

maybe heart attack?thats y the miss spell?!!

2:09 AM  
Blogger The Mad Girl said...

ohh lovely!!!!

11:54 AM  
Anonymous fanatika said...

The picture! Did you click it?
Is there a fan club of yours?!

7:45 AM  
Anonymous Shalini Surendran said...

Beautiful...!!

9:14 PM  

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