Friday, June 13, 2008

Coffee.com Series

S and I met. Again.

Coffee.com is our attempt at writing, abstraction and honesty.

Disclaimers come usually in the end. But then we decided, we are but usually unusual.
I'm not a mother. But if I was one, I'd still read it. And I'd wish my daughter would too.



Residues

The smell of burnt out lamps.

Almost dry semen left unwiped complete.

Your sunscreen on my lips.

Your smile left incomplete.

An edited story.

Chai leaves on drunk glasses
Lipstick printed.

Cigarette butts in almost empty whiskey glasses.

Locked windows, bolts thrown in
Open doors...

"Thank you, last night was great"
I've had better.
And I want more.

20 Comments:

Blogger Sharav said...

"And I want more........" another blow ;->
Cheers!

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Anonymous Bijoy said...

It's going to be delicate.

9:45 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Sharav: :) Blow eh?

Sindhu: Sick!

Bijoy: Yeah... I know I'm perhaps pushing it a lil too far.

11:01 AM  
Anonymous Mahesh said...

I kinda liked it. But am not sure if I understood it that well. :(

It was nice though ! :) Yeah! i know what u're thinkin... hehe

11:25 PM  
Anonymous Dr. Rituraj said...

Heya... I must say u touch the cords deep inside wid ur words... It took me 1 full night to read all ur posts on my cell while travelling & i still dont know wht made me so hooked... Is it ur words or ur feelings which create insomnia so much that i feel addicted to ur posts ??? Would love 2 read frm u every day !
Keep the magic going...
Cheers !

6:41 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Interesting...but couldn't quite connect the last bit- that you had better one/s?
Hmm, there's an old jungle saying- never to tell your lover that someone/sometime was better than the one now!

:-) SS

10:44 PM  
Blogger one among the crowd said...

hi,

incompletions...irrational...
irrevarant.. ingredient...but puts forth...new realms for inquest..and..opportunity for.... exuberant exultation.......

the finality...absorbing

....keep posting

10:52 PM  
Blogger arvindiyer said...

Coffee.com series.. very very apt:) Maybe u wanna check the typo in the title?
And If the series starts with such an awesome piece.. can't wait to read the rest:)
Coffee?

11:44 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Mahesh: What I'm thinking??

Dr.Rituraj: I am to prescribe a cure for the insomnia and to a doc? :)

SS: Thats why its absurdly honest. Such stuff wont go well with anyone.

OAC: Or leave behind an after taste... a residue. Which is what all this is about.

Arvind: :) Thank you. And coffee yeah- in Pondy! :)

12:11 AM  
Anonymous Dr.Rituraj said...

U kno wht... Its so easy to relate wid ur words ! Every time i go thru ur posts it looks as if its my story, my words... The best thing abt u is ur feelings r so intense tht it stirs the soul & then the reader feels : " Ah... i was in her shoes not so long ago ! " So plz b more frequent in postings coz this dentist is all crazy for ur words... Take the cares !

3:45 AM  
Blogger Samyak said...

Please write about something else!!

10:49 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

How do you manage to write like this? Seriously, you are amazing. totally amazing. Blessed I would say.

8:27 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Doc: I'd like to post more frequent yes.. but, sigh. We all need to work for a living!

Samyak: Something else... that will take a long time coming!

Anon: I think I should offer a prayer of thanks.

9:58 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yes, a prayer would go a long way I suppose.

10:47 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your words touch the innermost feelings which were there in my hearts for years ,unknown to me.Now I know these were mine too, but unexpressed.Alas I find a fellow traveller atleast at the fag end of my journey.

5:47 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Anon: There you go. A small prayer!

Anon: We start living the moment we want to. Never too late.

12:27 AM  
Anonymous Mahesh said...

that am a pervert! :P

11:14 PM  
Blogger workhard said...

Its a very delicate and intimate moment, Graphical

BPO work from home

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