We'll never turn back
Had I known it was the last time I would see him...
- I'd have kissed a less harder
- I'd not have called him as soon as the translucent grey puff of smoke from the bus that took me away, disappeared into the sky.
- I'd not have spent most of the night watching him sleep.
- I'd not have let him hear my heartbeat
- I'd have told him that I loved him. Just because he didn't deserve it.
For you see, all along he knew that it was the last time he'd want to see me.
- I'd have kissed a less harder
- I'd not have called him as soon as the translucent grey puff of smoke from the bus that took me away, disappeared into the sky.
- I'd not have spent most of the night watching him sleep.
- I'd not have let him hear my heartbeat
- I'd have told him that I loved him. Just because he didn't deserve it.
For you see, all along he knew that it was the last time he'd want to see me.
posted by Mrs. Dalloway | 5:35 AM
23 Comments:
Sometimes I dont get right words to comment on ur post, even if I really like it.
D
D: As long as I know you liked it, the words dont matter!
sometimes your sitting in office on a rainy day.. ready to fall asleep.. and then you read something that makes you sit up and go wow.
This one did.
ya dear...
I connect to that...a calculated and controlled decision...but could nt you feel it??? I could almost sense something amiss...
but then found scoffing away and melting myslef into some of the best moments of my life...u must have just done the same...or did u feel cheated?????
why would be the kissing less harder??
people come into your life and they leave making place for the newer and better one s. life just moves on with all its twists and twirls.
I just have one word WOW!
alok
Love you. Love the pics. LOve the writings and Love you.
People usually regret things they did Not do, not the ones they did.
I wonder which category would this one fall in?
-Sparsh
Someone: Rainy day and office... what a lousy combination I must say!
Anon: Rebellious.
Anon: Harder here meant with more force.
Trishna: And we move on with life, twisted n turned inside.
Alok: And my 2 words, 'Thank you!'
Abinash: The middle part, I'll take! And to the first & last- :)
Sparsh: Somewhere in between.
He should have been kissed harder so that he remembers for the rest of his life as to what he has missed.
hmmm... the slick of wet sand after the tide finally rolls back out....
Good one Poornima :)
I feel the same as D , short of words to comment on something so nice ...:)
Too tongue tied to say anything :)
Prayag: Why waste a perfectly splendid kiss on someone who doesnt deserve it?!
Preetha: The same tide that never turns back.
Sherry: And yet you did! :)
then why kiss at all??
hi poornima,
hindsight ambushes all the joy.
insouciant being leads to newer pleasures of living full and out...
have fun...even if it is at his expense ... keep writing..
Would she have not done any of that for sure? :)
Prayag: Well, kissing is quite nice isn't it? :)
OAC: At his expense. But the areas of intersection between his and mine- seem unfair.
Sudarshan: :) You know her too well. Yes, she'd have done all that and all over again.
hey,
ah ha...
everything is fair in war..and..
Well, it is great provided we are in love (even if she is to betray us).But, kissing some1 whom we know that we are to dump the next moment will be horrible in my case. May be we differ here ;)
this one brings back memories.
and makes me doubt Him;
If He built the heart out of the same wood he used for our souls.
OAC: Oh.. its all unfair in love!
Anon: Kissing someone you know is gonna dump you is gonna be horribler I must say!
Varun: Question your faith in Him. He'll like i more than adulations.
avan pattichu
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