Sunday, July 22, 2007

Oh yeah

In a life.


They were always nameless women. Sex was the same. Same organs. Different noises and patterns of breathing. Different passions. But the same still. All take and a pretence at give.

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In a life.


They were always men with different names. Sex was always cloaked in making love. All the giving and no getting back. Because getting back always extended beyond the four posters of the bed.




15 Comments:

Blogger dharmabum said...

lousy perspective, if i may say.

imho - its not either about taking or about giving, but about being. being there. being one.

11:56 PM  
Blogger Suma Subramaniam said...

Because in our world, everything in nature does...this piece raises some pretty good questions. Good head start if you wish to write more about it.

12:03 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

But we still want it. Want-all the giving & Accept-no getting back. Why? Do you know?

D

1:07 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi dear...
you make it look so bad da!!!
Guess..you can apply the theory of induction only after a good bit of experiences....
By the way..y do women always have to pretend...whether be it in love or sex??

1:20 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Balu: PerspectiveS dear!

Suma: Writing more would make more sense than there actually is!

D: No choice darling! Thats why!

Anon: I dont know about 'always' but I do know that they 'sometimes' do. :)

1:33 AM  
Blogger greenhorn said...

can there be a take without a give......

3:40 AM  
Anonymous one among the crowd said...

hello....

one end of the spectrum - sustenance and survival

at the other end - fun and pleasure
a whole lot in between (pun unintended - )
not necessarily in disorder...
anyway(s) cloaked in whimsical pretences. give and take, right and wrong, good and bad, guilty and innocent??? anything conclusive, any convictions...we stand where we are immorally comfortable - relatively!!! who says yes!!!

nice thought for a post... keep writing.

9:02 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Greenhorn: There apparently is!

OAC: Pun unintended! Lol!

10:06 PM  
Blogger Alok said...

Well take and give is so individualistic .....

and i guess at the end of the road if there is no giving back we need to stand on our own two sweet feet and take back wht the other took frm us ....

its not as easy though i think

tc
alok

11:41 PM  
Blogger arvindiyer said...

If its all about giving and not taking anything back.. then life wouldn't be the same like u had mentioned at the start.. Guess i need to look deeper into this particular piece to find more messages? (if any)

How u been?:)

4:02 AM  
Anonymous induviduality said...

Hey girl,

How you be? am here after a while... and everytime I come back here I find a thread that's running on my mind here.. sometimes coming here makes me realize that it was always there...

Indu

1:53 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

move from strength and not need, ask for what you want and not what you need.

3:24 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Alok: It never is easy.

Arvind: Look and you shall find! :D

Indu: Fine. :)

Anon: That sounded a lot like what I want to hear!

10:39 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

it's what you were asking for ...

5:11 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Anon: And smartass how would you know?!

1:42 AM  

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