posted by Mrs. Dalloway | 3:05 AM
hi poornima,loved it for the disturbed ripples. a sweet one. H G Wells would have started from where your loved J & H left.so near....yet...told about ...but not talked to..heard about...but ...the footsteps rustled on the dry leaves....there it was and then...the strength of the grip was .. . dripping pleasure...but where was the hand...salsa..he was there? the face cracked for the first time as the smile let aglow ... flickered and vanished...
Hi dear...Poor--nima, not able to get over him kya???Will compliment you only when u surpass ur own benchmark...:)
D: :)OAC: WOW! See, you better listen to me and WRITE! Anon: Who wants 'getting over'?
beautiful shadow... :)
I read it at two levels"He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.- the qualities tht u r looking for but never found one"He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.- u found the person but he is no more in ur lifei might be wrong in my interpretation but anyways ..beautiful as alwaysalok
Greenhorn: Most shadows now are!Alok: The latter is more suited. :)
Hey Poornima ,How are you ? beautiful as always :) waiting for next post !
wow! this is just really nice and usual how I feel... when will the gllumness go? :(
Reshmi: I just posted yesterday!!! :)Indu: Sigh! I wish I knew dear!
Good One Poornima!The last line was really good! -Poornima P
Probably because you have no replacement for the love you felt then.Can't you just "love"? as a verb? I'd like to know what you think.
:)whomsoever wants not "getting over" of what "got over"?Thought so...Its also of the glumness that Indu mentioned and u did wish(sigh)...dear
P: Ty! :)Ajay: You can love, love as a verb. Which involes some action. But the other form of love is when its directed at something and then there is no action there. Just a dull ache sometimes. As is now.Anon: I do.
hey P V,I sometimes think of sending you a line when I see the tiny pic of those tiny feet raised... are they in the middle of a dance? and then I think oh hell not good to barge in like that!Indu
Indu: I'll work that out for you.
meaning? don't tell me the same thing that they are trying to nail into me 'wait and watch' ;)
hey they blocked it here! Just today in the afternoon... so will reply later :)
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