A Shadow A Song
He is
…an S&G song
…a huckleberry friend
…the now missing mails in my Inbox
…an unwritten letter
…a husky laugh
…a wood scented voice in the head
He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.
…an S&G song
…a huckleberry friend
…the now missing mails in my Inbox
…an unwritten letter
…a husky laugh
…a wood scented voice in the head
He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.
posted by Mrs. Dalloway | 3:05 AM
18 Comments:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D
hi poornima,
loved it for the disturbed ripples. a sweet one. H G Wells would have started from where your loved J & H left.
so near....yet...
told about ...but not talked to..
heard about...but ...
the footsteps rustled on the dry leaves....there it was and then...
the strength of the grip was .. . dripping pleasure...but where was the hand...salsa..
he was there? the face cracked for the first time as the smile let aglow ... flickered and vanished...
Hi dear...
Poor--nima, not able to get over him kya???
Will compliment you only when u surpass ur own benchmark...:)
D: :)
OAC: WOW! See, you better listen to me and WRITE!
Anon: Who wants 'getting over'?
beautiful shadow... :)
I read it at two levels
"He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.
- the qualities tht u r looking for but never found one
"He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.
- u found the person but he is no more in ur life
i might be wrong in my interpretation but anyways ..
beautiful as always
alok
Greenhorn: Most shadows now are!
Alok: The latter is more suited. :)
Hey Poornima ,
How are you ? beautiful as always :) waiting for next post !
wow! this is just really nice and usual how I feel... when will the gllumness go? :(
Reshmi: I just posted yesterday!!! :)
Indu: Sigh! I wish I knew dear!
Good One Poornima!
The last line was really good!
-Poornima P
Probably because you have no replacement for the love you felt then.
Can't you just "love"? as a verb? I'd like to know what you think.
:)whomsoever wants not "getting over" of what "got over"?
Thought so...Its also of the glumness that Indu mentioned and u did wish(sigh)...dear
P: Ty! :)
Ajay: You can love, love as a verb. Which involes some action. But the other form of love is when its directed at something and then there is no action there. Just a dull ache sometimes. As is now.
Anon: I do.
hey P V,
I sometimes think of sending you a line when I see the tiny pic of those tiny feet raised... are they in the middle of a dance? and then I think oh hell not good to barge in like that!
Indu
Indu: I'll work that out for you.
meaning? don't tell me the same thing that they are trying to nail into me 'wait and watch' ;)
hey they blocked it here! Just today in the afternoon... so will reply later :)
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