Monday, August 13, 2007

A Shadow A Song

He is

…an S&G song

…a huckleberry friend

…the now missing mails in my Inbox

…an unwritten letter

…a husky laugh

…a wood scented voice in the head

He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.

18 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

D

3:27 AM  
Anonymous one among the crowd said...

hi poornima,

loved it for the disturbed ripples. a sweet one. H G Wells would have started from where your loved J & H left.

so near....yet...
told about ...but not talked to..
heard about...but ...
the footsteps rustled on the dry leaves....there it was and then...
the strength of the grip was .. . dripping pleasure...but where was the hand...salsa..
he was there? the face cracked for the first time as the smile let aglow ... flickered and vanished...

3:54 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi dear...
Poor--nima, not able to get over him kya???
Will compliment you only when u surpass ur own benchmark...:)

3:57 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

D: :)

OAC: WOW! See, you better listen to me and WRITE!

Anon: Who wants 'getting over'?

4:59 AM  
Blogger greenhorn said...

beautiful shadow... :)

5:41 AM  
Blogger Alok said...

I read it at two levels

"He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.
- the qualities tht u r looking for but never found one

"He is a wavery watery shadow of a person gone. Of a person who perhaps was never there.
- u found the person but he is no more in ur life

i might be wrong in my interpretation but anyways ..

beautiful as always

alok

5:50 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Greenhorn: Most shadows now are!

Alok: The latter is more suited. :)

6:23 AM  
Anonymous Reshmi said...

Hey Poornima ,

How are you ? beautiful as always :) waiting for next post !

12:40 PM  
Anonymous indu said...

wow! this is just really nice and usual how I feel... when will the gllumness go? :(

1:24 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Reshmi: I just posted yesterday!!! :)

Indu: Sigh! I wish I knew dear!

5:12 AM  
Blogger P said...

Good One Poornima!
The last line was really good!

-Poornima P

9:41 PM  
Anonymous thelearner said...

Probably because you have no replacement for the love you felt then.

Can't you just "love"? as a verb? I'd like to know what you think.

4:36 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

:)whomsoever wants not "getting over" of what "got over"?
Thought so...Its also of the glumness that Indu mentioned and u did wish(sigh)...dear

10:44 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

P: Ty! :)

Ajay: You can love, love as a verb. Which involes some action. But the other form of love is when its directed at something and then there is no action there. Just a dull ache sometimes. As is now.

Anon: I do.

11:24 PM  
Anonymous indu said...

hey P V,

I sometimes think of sending you a line when I see the tiny pic of those tiny feet raised... are they in the middle of a dance? and then I think oh hell not good to barge in like that!

Indu

1:18 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Indu: I'll work that out for you.

1:59 AM  
Anonymous indu said...

meaning? don't tell me the same thing that they are trying to nail into me 'wait and watch' ;)

2:03 AM  
Anonymous indu said...

hey they blocked it here! Just today in the afternoon... so will reply later :)

2:07 AM  

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