Monday, October 24, 2005

If this is love...



I wish the couch was not this long.
I wish your arms were longer.
I wish the movie was longer.
I wish I had another day.

The couch was unnecessarily long. Or maybe someone else should have sat beside me, on the other side. It would have warranted an excuse for moving towards you in an attempt at making space for the other. I did use the half turned television screen as an excuse and moved from one end of the couch to the center.

That was already very brash of me.

Maybe I'll hold your hand when we cross the street today. So we better go out.

I wish this movie was shorter now.

27 Comments:

Blogger Trebuchet said...

Beautiful writing.

3:24 PM  
Blogger yesbob said...

nice one

3:33 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Trebuchet: Thank you.

Yesbob: As nice as you?

3:47 PM  
Blogger Hyde said...

Next time, look at the running time too? :-)

4:13 PM  
Anonymous Anon from frost said...

nice one :)

10:56 PM  
Anonymous Annie said...

Adore your style...
:)

5:20 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Hyde: You know, this Sunday I was watching 'The league of extrodinary gentlemen' and fell completely for Hyde! And bang- the very next day, I get a comment from apna own Hyde!

Anon from frost: I still have no clue who this is!

Thank you all the same.

Annie: Wow, thanks! Are you who I think you are?!

7:31 AM  
Anonymous Divya said...

very nice!

8:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Poo: nice write up ...having a hard day there, Poo ?

L_D

3:35 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Divya: Thank you.

L_D: Ah- its painful. How did you ever guess!?

4:41 PM  
Blogger Praveen said...

I think this is the smallest post you have written so far :). Was the picture of the couch (and the hand) really referring to what you mention in this post? :) Just curious thats all.

11:56 PM  
Blogger Shim said...

Excellent as always!

4:01 AM  
Blogger Arvind Iyer said...

curiouser and curiouser...
what happened to good-old articles with a start and an end stuff in the middle...

5:28 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Praveen: Lack of time is the reason. Only reason! Of course, the pic talks about what I've written in the post.

Shim: Chech- awww....... you always say such nice things! How've you been?

Arvind: I take it that you didn't like this post!

7:12 AM  
Blogger Arun said...

Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!

~ Arun

p.s I am maha impressed!

12:00 PM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Arun: Thank, thank, thank- YOU!

7:40 AM  
Blogger Sujit said...

too good..

7:53 AM  
Blogger Arun said...

Mention, Mention, Mention - NOT!

11:39 AM  
Blogger Hyde said...

Am assuming you noticed the connection between that movie and my mugshot too.

3:54 AM  
Blogger Arvind Iyer said...

yup...
but i read the blue-saree post after i disconnected. that was really good.

4:13 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Sujit: Thank you.

Arun: Now what am I to answer?!

Hyde: Glaringly obvious it was!

Arvind: Hmmm.... Well, it takes all kinds!

7:15 AM  
Blogger Arun said...

Couch na kaho, couch bhi na kaho!

~ A

11:17 AM  
Blogger arvindiyer said...

Are you back where you are supposed to be? maybe another walk from the house to the beach would make sense?:) take care

1:14 AM  
Blogger pallavi said...

update complete!
another one in the offing...we meet the infamous yet again, yes...love!
more details in an email which u will recieve as so i am done writing it..
how is the global watchdog treating you??

7:58 PM  
Blogger manuscrypts said...

happy deepavali :)

4:07 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Arun: Lol! Leave the couch alone!

Arvind: I never knew where I should be!! And I am walking miles everyday!!!!

Pallavi: Oh man, I did miss you! *Hug* Yes, do write. How is England treating you sweetheart?

Manu: Ah- happy Diwali to you too. But I do think Mallus are the only species who never celebrate that festival!

7:20 AM  
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