Until
we met again, I knew I wasn’t in love with you
Now
I'm not sure if I am not in love with you.
And
I know this unsureness exists
Only
because I know you aren’t.
Again
I lie to myself.
Always
I'm an expert at pretending.
we met again, I knew I wasn’t in love with you
Now
I'm not sure if I am not in love with you.
And
I know this unsureness exists
Only
because I know you aren’t.
Again
I lie to myself.
Always
I'm an expert at pretending.
posted by Mrs. Dalloway | 8:50 PM
36 Comments:
There appears a misleading complexity in the lines, when you first read it. And like all you write- I read it again and discover how beautiful those lines are. Gr8t!
I too agree with W.. i read post three times..beautiful lines..:-)
hmmm
very nice
Prince of your heart seems to be bothering you ....I heard this line somewhere that the Pleasure of love lasts but a moment, Pain of love lasts a lifetime.
So you are lying to us that you can lie very well to yourself. I'm just kidding here. Not a good thing to lie to yourself though.
And whats this about the lines being very complicated and having to read them again?
The meaning is apparent in one read.
And I totally agree love is bullshit.
W: Thank you.
Pritika: He he! Thank you! :)
Dhanush: Enthu patti?
Xoff: See, you DO understand!
Forestera: I do agree to the pain and pleasure bit part!
Trinetram: Oh come on... be kind! :p
You dont HAVE to pretend.
Joe: A woman thing. She ALWAYS has to pretend! At least pretend that she's not pretending!
kore neram irunnu thala punnakkiyappol aanu enthelum onnu manasilaaythu.. pinne neduveerpettathu... u are back to romance ennullathu kondum :)
until now you never needed to pretend.
and only way existed was to be unsure.
again and always never need to lie.
lets hear a lot more from the bottom of the heart.
hey love....guess the lines were too much for a pavam pattalakaran... but an expert at pretending...U...hmmmmm????
You managed to convey a negativity about positive things. Usage of it makes the reader go back and read again!! Well, written.
Dhanush: Back to romance? It always existed!
OAC: :)
Aks: Again and again, it needn't always be about me honey!
Shinu: Positive, negative- always things to play around with! :)
didn't make any sense to me.
And the eternal quest of man to understand what the woman says goes on...
varrry varrrryy uh! interesting...lol!! comfortably dumb...
btw...lots to update u abt...when ya gonna find some time out fer moi?! busy-bee.....
Reminds me the title of an old James Bond film, 'Never say Never again'.
Raka: Women are not made to be understood.
Sharat: Soon. We'll go out!
Dev: Lol!
Wonderful lines !!!Enjoyed reading every bit of it.............
Reshmi: Thank you! :)
Reverend: Welcome back! :)
what a haiku! :)
know somethin?! this piece actually reminds me of a conversation we had a couple of days after you quit...varrrry varrrry interesting Pvij! ;D
Phatichar: Haiku! Nah!!!
Sharat: he he. Am back to my old number! Call me!!! Lost the sim remember!!!
Lost the sim, hmmm and well u have my number. How u doin?
Ur an expert pretender? I didn't know.
poornima,
V. well written.
But u can continue to be in love no matter whether it is reciprocated!
We are what we pretend to be, so we must be careful about what we pretend to be. - Kurt vonnegut
Chitra: Of course!
Clash: Poor Kurt Vonnegut! I dread being what I pretend being!
"expert at pretending" - So the whole show goes awry; I can see it all over!!
Clash: As long as there is an audience, the show will go on. Especially one's that seem to have taken a 'forever' ticket!!!
Very beautiful!
Poorni: :)
Aniyan: Will I pls do what?
The Pretender:
web.mit.edu/sharat/www/writing/poems/pretender.html
Naah.. Me more like the SEAL. Adapt, Improvise, Overcome.. well.The Contant Learner, I still have to climb the Shoulders of the Giants.
-M@\/r!<
The Pretender:
web.mit.edu/sharat/www/writing/poems/pretender.html
Naah.. Me more like the SEAL. Adapt, Improvise, Overcome.. well.The Contant Learner, I still have to climb the Shoulders of the Giants.
-M@\/r!<
Sharat: That went whossh!!!
WoW.... Its superb....!!!!
I'm adding no more words that dilute t feeling....
Its really Good....!!
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