Burnt out
from inkless pens
of translucent sadness
leaving an impression
illegible
only to feel
in sunken depths
of lifeless paper
posted by Mrs. Dalloway | 4:06 PM
- Flowers on the pavement
- Do you know how long longing can be?
- More than a fistful of sky
- 'Thank you' cannot be gift wrapped
- Down to the last cigarette
- The place outside the mind
- Stars don't cry
- Hey Stranger...
- Paper boats on waterless seas
- No room, no door
Monday, February 25, 2008
from inkless pens
of translucent sadness
leaving an impression
illegible
only to feel
in sunken depths
of lifeless paper
13 Comments:
Has the effect been so "deep" yaar????
Djnair: In the process of sobering!
Awww...
:)
smear black on the paper
read the white
until tears roll
the impression illegible again...
best thing about your words: they open gates :)
Hope Hope Hope
n
Smile Smile Smile
Since when has being in depression been glamorous?
Ever since Poornima's been casting rainbows in places where colors usually fail to register.
That was amazing!
(Honest,I don't want to revel in all your poetry at your expense.Hope you're actually feeling ok)
Cheer up!
phew!
Is all the love in this world enough for you? :)
Readin you for so long..one feeling gets stronger all the time..go home..grow old..and keep it simple..that must be worthwhile.-A
love the metaphors ..
Alok
hey sweetheart....
an awesome one this was......something so deep portrayed so beautifully by a few well woven words...
I don't like your sabbaticals....
A beauty! translucent sadness.. amazing metaphor!
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