Monday, February 25, 2008

Burnt out

Writing
from inkless pens
of translucent sadness
leaving an impression
illegible
only to feel
in sunken depths
of lifeless paper


13 Comments:

Blogger djnair said...

Has the effect been so "deep" yaar????

4:16 AM  
Blogger Poornima said...

Djnair: In the process of sobering!

5:03 AM  
Blogger Samyak said...

Awww...

8:03 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

:)

11:07 AM  
Blogger varun said...

smear black on the paper
read the white
until tears roll
the impression illegible again...

best thing about your words: they open gates :)

3:36 PM  
Blogger Preetha Nair said...

Hope Hope Hope
n
Smile Smile Smile

4:02 PM  
Anonymous melanie said...

Since when has being in depression been glamorous?
Ever since Poornima's been casting rainbows in places where colors usually fail to register.
That was amazing!
(Honest,I don't want to revel in all your poetry at your expense.Hope you're actually feeling ok)
Cheer up!

4:23 AM  
Blogger Buccaneer said...

phew!

4:54 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is all the love in this world enough for you? :)
Readin you for so long..one feeling gets stronger all the time..go home..grow old..and keep it simple..that must be worthwhile.-A

2:59 AM  
Blogger Alok said...

love the metaphors ..

Alok

1:00 AM  
Blogger aks said...

hey sweetheart....

an awesome one this was......something so deep portrayed so beautifully by a few well woven words...

8:54 AM  
Blogger Samyak said...

I don't like your sabbaticals....

10:18 PM  
Blogger Winnie the poohi said...

A beauty! translucent sadness.. amazing metaphor!

3:19 PM  

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